This is very sophisticated and it is nice to see how the letterhead works with a letter on it. The oyster with the signature on top at the bottom is overpowering. Perhaps the oyster could be toned down or it might be stronger if the oyster was gold and the signature was black. You are missing elements of the stationery. The expectation is to have an envelope and business card as well. This is a set that might even include additional promotional materials such as a notecard or direct mailer piece. Any pieces that would benefit your brand need to be considered.
This is very sophisticated and it is nice to see how the letterhead works with a letter on it. The oyster with the signature on top at the bottom is overpowering. Perhaps the oyster could be toned down or it might be stronger if the oyster was gold and the signature was black. You are missing elements of the stationery. The expectation is to have an envelope and business card as well. This is a set that might even include additional promotional materials such as a notecard or direct mailer piece. Any pieces that would benefit your brand need to be considered.
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